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{TcF}-Penguin-{G}(11th)
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Every one says two sentences in a story, then the person below continues where you left off.


You can post again after 3 people post after you.

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August 15, 2011 at 8:03 PM Flag Quote & Reply

General Kevin (TR-AC)
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It seemed like another training simulation on Kamino the day before, but as I look into the weary clone troopers face, the bombardment of coruscant began. As the commander of the 41st elite legion, we braced the bombs and alearted the fleet that the day of the Separatist invasion has finally came to rain down hailfire on the shield generators covering coruscant......

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Terran Republic, Armored Column Division General Officer

August 15, 2011 at 8:17 PM Flag Quote & Reply

{TcF}-Penguin-{G}(11th)
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Then out of the smokey of battle the 11th Aiborne battalion gunships swoop in! Lazzering the enemy droids on the ground with there turret guns, Then General Patriot Penguin, Spartan and Barney with there high altitude jump suits on plunged into the fog of war....

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August 15, 2011 at 8:23 PM Flag Quote & Reply

{TcF}=Recon={G}{701st}
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then the 701marines came  to help penguin spartan and barney .penguin was shot in the arm but he was still fighting they were very thankful that the 701marines came when they did but we had 1 thing that we had to do before we can go

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August 15, 2011 at 9:58 PM Flag Quote & Reply

(GRC)Carter
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and that was to wipe out the Elite WUSI Troopers, which has dispatched a small camp on the floor of the Coruscant world. So Carter, under the order of General Kevin, lead the 701st Battallion to their attacking positions.

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August 15, 2011 at 11:07 PM Flag Quote & Reply

BarneyWhite
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They fought bravely and stongly, then the brave 11th air divison dropped behind enemy lines Swooshing into the enemy camp guns ablaze. We fought feircely and won the battle,the 701st were thankfull and they all ate grub together back at the base.

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BarneyWhite

August 15, 2011 at 11:29 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Rickcastle45
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But infortunetly, the war was not over; the latest intel report had come in with nothing but bad news. The outter Rim territories wereunder serious attack and help had be called for from all systems in the sector. The war had only truly begun.

August 16, 2011 at 6:52 AM Flag Quote & Reply

{TcF}-Penguin-{G}(11th)
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While the war raged on in the outer rims, and 11th and 701st were at Base camp 407# on Courscant, the 305th are being deployed by the TCFAF in the heat of the battle. Rick and his battalion deploy in the urban warfare of the inner of Courscant.

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Americans don’t work to live—they work to stuff their home with Chinese-made products that no one will want after they die.

August 16, 2011 at 12:11 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Rickcastle45
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The undercity is not a good place to live, and even less to fight! Broken bits of this and that lying around, and the corridors were far too narrow. We retreated, and sent down and EMP.

August 16, 2011 at 9:26 PM Flag Quote & Reply

General Kevin (TR-AC)
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General Kevin recalls 4 republic assault ships to get gunships ready and send the commandos into hard contact.... they have destroyed most of the seperatist fleet leaving general grevious to flee for a new sith world. All the generals now call up all the clones to be dispatched and now starts the new parrt of the war: the outer rim sages.

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Terran Republic, Armored Column Division General Officer

August 16, 2011 at 9:35 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Jaden

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but then there were assasin snipers ready to destroy  all, thankfully the 65 legion came and saved the clones before they were killed . but i was shot in the arm. i am now undergoing medical treatment


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August 17, 2011 at 5:54 AM Flag Quote & Reply

Rickcastle45
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In the Senate, deliberations were still undergoing about the Outer Rim seiges. Having lost more troops than the Kaminoan cloners could create, the Republic had started inlisting men to join the cause. But civilians had no training, and even then, the months of work had to be accomplished before they troops could be deployed. Medical frigates were in desperate need as mass production started to depleet, having most ressourced worlds under Seperatists control.

Hoping for some releif, the Republic Senate proposed a vote, a vote to continue to finance the war and breen more clones to end this war, once and for all. The vote was to be held that evening, but......

August 17, 2011 at 11:12 AM Flag Quote & Reply

{TcF}-Penguin-{G}(11th)
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While the squabling went on in the senate, General Penguin and General Kevin take the matters into there own hands by creating a plot to assasinate a jedi called anakin...Because he is ugly and annoying, so General Penguin and the 11th airborne and 701st Marines fly to the area of courscant where anakin is in, they find him in a tuxedo drinking cocktails, and margeretas.

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Americans don’t work to live—they work to stuff their home with Chinese-made products that no one will want after they die.

August 17, 2011 at 11:32 AM Flag Quote & Reply

{TcF}-Penguin-{G}(11th)
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Rick it's two sentences only, and you can only post after 3 people have posted after your last post..

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August 17, 2011 at 11:33 AM Flag Quote & Reply

Rickcastle45
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I know but I had so much to say! and why does everything have to do with ourselves.. can't you guys wright about other people? Back to the story....

August 17, 2011 at 11:45 AM Flag Quote & Reply

(GRC)Carter
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Anyway, the attempt to assasinate Anakin resulted in a failure. As Penguin and Kevin raised their weapons, anakin threw his lightsaber towards them killing Pengy and severely injuring Kevin.

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August 17, 2011 at 2:40 PM Flag Quote & Reply

BarneyWhite
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But suddenly Barney swoops in, and kills everyone exept Kevin and Penguin and revives Penguin, and loads them both onto a medcial shuttel. And they went  to the 701st and they were restored back to full health in a matter of weeks.

 

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August 17, 2011 at 3:25 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Jaden

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so once jaden had healed, he went with gens pengy and kev to go kill anakin. after order 66 had happened, and all jedi kids were dead, they had to find more. when pengy kev and jaden were fighting, jaden and kev had used force powers, so they were able to fight most clones with the hlepa of pengy, but when tey were going to continue the bsttle, anakin came and killed jaden when he had pushed kev and pengy to a hiding place so they can live

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August 18, 2011 at 2:07 AM Flag Quote & Reply

Rickcastle45
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Time seemed to slow down as Jaden pushed Kevin and Penguin out of the way of the incoming lightsaber, glowing bright blue throught it's path, with nothing to stop it from hitting it's target. Both general fell on the ground and turned in unison to see the Brigader General of the 65th be peirced in the chest with the blue blade of pure energy.

 

A scream tried to come out of their mouths but no sound came, and they lay there, screaming a soundless scream as Jaden's body slumped to the ground, Anakin standing over him, looking victorious. He started to advance on Kevin and Penguin smiling madly, coming in for the kill. But suddenly, the smile faded away to shock as blue bolts of energy hit him squarely in the back.

 

Anakin Skywalker toppled over, a sizzling, smoking hole left in his back and as he fell, a figure sourounded in the fog of war rose up from his crouch, hoisting his still smoking gun.

"Jaden is avenged.' said General Rick. 'But we must continue fighting, we will have time to mourn for our brother later. And, we must protect our brother's son, Kad.''

 

I know it's long but you can't expcet me to let one of our brothers die in 2 sentences! And there is so much more I wanted to add! But anyway, on with the story!

August 18, 2011 at 9:39 AM Flag Quote & Reply

Nigh
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Just then a full FLEET of SPAARTII clones and Asault Frigates came in from SPAARTII cloning cylinders. Coruscant had just fallen to the Galactic Empire, cause for Anakin trying to kill them, and the CIS has disbanded

 

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August 18, 2011 at 9:55 AM Flag Quote & Reply

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