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{TcF}-Penguin-{G}(11th)
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When the last of the republic fleet arives on Rhen Var they find it desolate, and barren with ruins from the previous civilization. When they find a ancient city named Citidel, they decide to make it the TcF Military Training Base, and set up there communication systems in the old 'crpyt' Major Rex comes in with a message, jaden has betrayed the republic and joined the evil empire, and become apprentice to the sith lords. General Rick and his elite leaders of 5 men, enter the room, and greet general penguin and Admiral Barney.


Sorry it's three sentences such a good story!!!

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August 26, 2011 at 2:14 AM Flag Quote & Reply

(GRC)Carter
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He also soons discovers that the 701st had been attacked and Billy and Carter were taken prisioners. So they sent out a rescue team in order to save their beloved companions.

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August 26, 2011 at 6:57 PM Flag Quote & Reply

{TcF}=Recon={G}{701st}
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they almost kill me and carter but penguin and rick save us just in time bc they were going to kill us. me and carter were so happy when they came.

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August 27, 2011 at 11:47 AM Flag Quote & Reply

{TcF}-Penguin-{G}(11th)
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After infiltrating Emperial prison ship, Rick, two troopers, penguin, and barney take out the two storm trooper guards and take there advanced emperial blasters and put them in there back pack, then they make it to the last of the 701st's cell Carter, Billy ,Nigh,Cozmo, Captain , Death, Dan Penguin are the last ones, Rick plants explosive at the cell door and blows it up, but it alearts the rest of the ship to the breach in security. Penguin hands carter and billy the blasters, and they prepare to get out off the star cruiser.

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August 27, 2011 at 1:50 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Rickcastle45
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As they prepare themselves, a horrible sight meets their eyes. The Empire had had enough of the charades. They had assembled teh largest fleet that the galaxy had ever seen, and bombarded teh planet until it was a crust like Kessel; there was no surviors.

August 27, 2011 at 7:37 PM Flag Quote & Reply

{TcF}-Penguin-{G}(11th)
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Wich planet?? We left off on the prison ship..

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Americans don’t work to live—they work to stuff their home with Chinese-made products that no one will want after they die.

August 27, 2011 at 10:32 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Nigh
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Rickcastle45 at August 27, 2011 at 7:37 PM

As they prepare themselves, a horrible sight meets their eyes. The Empire had had enough of the charades. They had assembled teh largest fleet that the galaxy had ever seen, and bombarded teh planet until it was a crust like Kessel; there was no surviors.

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August 28, 2011 at 10:29 AM Flag Quote & Reply

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